hello all, i would need some help.

as everybody know, my english is really crappy.

for school we have to participate to an international competition ( architecture) so my text must be in english.

i used internet translator and i would need you to rebuild my text in a correct english.

so if some of you could take some mins to help me, i would be very glad

text:

"The construction shelters at the same moment elements of information for the visitors and elements of exchange where they can let their feelings.

It's a wood made contruction. It is a wooden structure on which come to settle panels.

The proposed elements of information are three types.

Paper information: a place is reserved for the display of posters concerning activities occurring in the region.

Computer informations: a computing border allows each to consult the information of an interactive way

Human informations: Sometimes it happens that you need a precise information that you cannot find by yourself and that a computer cannot come to your help. That is why it is indispensable to have a human presence for certain informations.

The central cylinder takes in messages, impressions, thoughts which the visitors leave for the following ones. A dialogue over the time instore then.

The computing border allows the same kind of thing but in a computing way.

It's possible to go on the top of the construction to change your point of view of the area"

imo you should do it by yourself.
it wont help you in any way if someone else does your work for you, except a free afternoon.

The english text is a bit useless as some parts don't even make sense.
You got the french text too?

hmmm yeah .. i'll ask to some french mates it'll be easier i think...

@ jonty: i don't care about english... i am in architecture and the work is not the stupid english text but all the creation work that is done.

Right. THere is a "thing" made of wood... and it is meant for people to see and use. It shows messages in a written poster, messages about what happens in the surroundings. Then it has a PC too where people can browse for other infos that are not listed on the poster (maybe because the poster only shows recent news? and the pc stores all the previous infors?) . THen there is also a person near this "thing" that has the posters and the PCs, and this person is meant to talk to people if they do not find what they look for.

Then there is a cilinder and inside it people can drop messages (written on scrap of papers?). The messages can be registered on the computer too.

On my opinion: it is an unusual information stand where people can interact with each other in a remote way.

Is that what you want to describe? The last phrase i did not understand. Going atop of the stand to view the area?

Maybe there are some expressions in french that do not make sense (at least in english and my language) if translated word by word.

Yay, the fellows of The French Blades will help

oups sry it's old post, but thx for answer. i asked 2 friends to do that, they are english teachers. they translated from french like that


"Construction shelters pieces of information for visitors and also pieces of exchange where they can leave their impressions. This is a wooden construction, a wooden structure on which boards are fixed.
There are three communication media.
“The paper information”: A place to post up notices and posters about the possible things to do and visit in the area.
“Data processing”: a computer border allows people to look for information in an interactive way.
“Human information: It can happen sometimes that you need accurate information that you cannot find by yourself and that even a computer is no help. This is why it turns out to be obvious to benefit a human presence concerning some information.
The main cylinder collects messages, impressions, thoughts that visitors leave for the followers. A conversation beyond the time limits is taking place.
The informatic border allows the same kind of service, but in a digital technology way.
It’s possible to reach the top of the structure in order to get another point of view of the surrounding space."

is it better? ^^

Why did you dig up a post from 12 years past ? I think he got the paper in quite a while ago .